Broken Hearts Bleed Just Like You and Me

[QueenPaige4]

I just want one more kiss
I just need one more blessful wish
I love you
And all I want is for you to be happy
With me or without
I want to bleed just like I use to
I want to die but I won't
I miss you
And I want to be with you again
But it's not happening
I don't think it will
Maybe I'm wrong
Maybe I'm right
I hope I'm wrong
She hopes I'm right
Look at me
I have a broken smile
Look I have tears built up
Nothing can take this away
This pain that I feel everyday
And maybe I care
maybe I don't
But I haven't left you waiting
for the answers to all the
Questions you wrote on a
blank piece of paper
I'm writing these answers in the air
They disappear like you did
And you want me to tell you everything
But somehow I can't say it
I can write it down
but you can't read it
And I want to bleed
just like my broken heart
Then all these dreams and tears
will float away and disappear
Just like you and me
Look into my eyes
Tell me what you find
I look into the mirror
I see a girl I once knew
Now I see a girl broken and hurt
I'm falling faster than before
But I still love you
And she can't take that away
Not even after I say it to your face
But I won't do it today

[Xanthic Flower]

[glow=red,2,300]Normally I'm not really into poetry but I liked this one.[/glow]

[allmeheart]

best yet of your work, amazing, its wonderful, u repeated some things but it only made the poem sem better no suggestions

[Only Me]

I really liked it... keep writing.. .the world needs a few more good writers...

[lockely]

[glow=black,2,300]i agree with the others, that was really good. it really made me think[/glow]

[QueenPaige4]

Thank you all

[Absinthe]

That was really, really good. Definitely one of your better ones.

[The Sightless Dreamer]

wow i think that was amazing and really quite moving.. i know i dont comment on others work.. but your was the first that i have been able to read and i think it was quite inspiring.

[QueenPaige4]

aw...well thanks. *blushes* wow i never actually thought that my poetry was inspiring. Thank you so much sightless dreamer.

[Sharon]

[glow=purple,2,300]I agree with Absinthe, this is definitely one of your better pieces.

Favorite part:[/glow]

Questions you wrote on a
blank piece of paper
I'm writing these answers in the air
They disappear like you did
And you want me to tell you everything
But somehow I can't say it
I can write it down
but you can't read it

[glow=purple,2,300]great job! ;D[/glow]

[QueenPaige4]

thanks so much sharon

[Laura]

"I want to bleed just like I use to"

--I like this.

"But I haven't left you waiting
for the answers to all the
Questions you wrote on a
blank piece of paper
I'm writing these answers in the air
They disappear like you did"

--I love how you mentioned writing in the air ... I do that.

Some of this was kind of like a conversation with yourself:

"Maybe I'm wrong
Maybe I'm right
I hope I'm wrong"

--and I'm not really a huge fan of that kind of work but you did good.

[QueenPaige4]

thank you so much sweetpearl