I used to love him

[Lauryn]

I used to love him,
But never had a chance.
I wanted him to ask me to dance.

Now we are enemies,
In the dull mortal world.
I have yet to see him smile.

I used to love him,
Now I think I am over him.

At least I hope I am,
Maybe I am not,
I still keep that thought in my head,
of how beautiful he was.

-Lauryn

Any comments? Please post

[Xanthic Flower]

[glow=red,2,300]I can relate. I like the last stanza the best.[/glow]

[allmeheart]

i agree and i can somewhat relate to that

[Sharon]

[glow=purple,2,300]many people can relate to this. what i like about this is, it's short and reading it portrays this confused-type of emotion. people some times get too wordy when they are trying to describe what they feel, this is certainly not the case in this one.[/glow]

[Only Me]

Cool... me likes...

[Laura]

"I used to love him,
But never had a chance.
I wanted him to ask me to dance.

Now we are enemies,"

--this is so my "relationship" with Dana ... I really screwed it up with him.