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Post by QueenPaige4 on Aug 1, 2005 12:48:49 GMT -6
Disappearing axes Falling from the sky There isn't anywhere for you to hide This is where I am In the middle of the road Holding a letter you wrote to me two months ago It's the last letter I've recieved from you I don't deserve to feel this pain These axes are hitting me Making me bleed I'm slowly dying as you are lying to the one you left behind in the rainstorm of falling axes And I lay here dead While still clutching the letter It's close to my heart And you can see what you've done to me Now this rainstorm is slowly passing by as I have now said goodbye It's written in my blood "Goodbye, farewell Christopher, You will forever be in my heart" And as you read it You suddenly break down crying Because you ran away from someone who loved you very much You look through my pockets Trying to find something I've left for you You find it It's a broken heart with your name in it (Chris) And around it, it says "Even though he has hurt me, I just want to let him know that memories of our love are floating in the air and every breath he takes, he knows he made a mistake but I still love him and I won't let him go." And suddenly something clicks in your mind Telling you I am right And as you walk away My body in your hands You realize you wouldn't just do this for anyone Even if you didn't love them.
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Post by Only Me on Aug 6, 2005 1:12:34 GMT -6
ok so... is it about an affair? or is it that the guy gave the girl the boot then realized only after he could never have her again that he had made a mistake...? does I even make sense? ok so its the whole theory about when you love something let it go... if it comes back you know its real or soemthing to the effect and if it comes back moments to late it wasnt meant to be...? sorry... i think i am jumbling thoguhts... it is really late and i am reaally tired... maybe i should get off of here and get some sleep... ? yea i think thats what I'll do... anyway. I love your work!
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Post by QueenPaige4 on Aug 6, 2005 15:18:58 GMT -6
its about a guy dumping this girl he loves for something she didn't mean to say and he came back to late when he realized he made a mistake. so yes you do have some of it right.
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Post by allmeheart on Aug 20, 2005 13:23:56 GMT -6
so far, your best yet, well at least in the order im reading ur posts
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Post by Laura on Aug 23, 2005 12:13:36 GMT -6
I really liked this part:
"There isn't anywhere for you to hide This is where I am In the middle of the road Holding a letter you wrote to me two months ago It's the last letter I've recieved from you I don't deserve to feel this pain"
--I can't say I have felt the same but I can understand where you're coming from. Love can be such a terrible thing.
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Post by QueenPaige4 on Sept 1, 2005 12:35:12 GMT -6
Thank you oh so much
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Post by Only Me on Sept 2, 2005 23:19:36 GMT -6
ok thanks for clarifying... thats what i thought but i was a little unsure... I really like it...
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Post by QueenPaige4 on Sept 10, 2005 7:02:29 GMT -6
thank you very much
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Post by Sharon on Sept 23, 2005 14:59:06 GMT -6
[glow=purple,2,300]interesting, one question though. why the choice of the words "Disappearing Axes" ?[/glow]
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Post by Absinthe on Sept 23, 2005 15:13:43 GMT -6
[glow=black,2,300] This is interesting. To be honest, I'm not really sure what I think about this one. [/glow]
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Post by QueenPaige4 on Sept 24, 2005 14:08:59 GMT -6
well actually it just came to me and it felt like it fit in the poem.
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