The Lullaby of Death

[QueenPaige4]

The Lullaby Of Death
Everything fading
The world is changing
For you and me
Temperature rising
You're hypnotizing
Me with your eyes
You're making me want
You even more than before
Looking up at the stars
With you in my arms
Is the perfect place for me
Seven days later you make
Me better than before
A month goes by and you
Aren't here
I stare at the pictures of you
And I want to burn them
I gave you my first kiss
You used me
Now it hurts
I can't accept your apology anymore
It has no meaning
You used me
And made me cry
Now go to sleep
As I sing the
Lullaby of
Death
to you

[Sharon]

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I sure there is plenty more where this piece came from. I look foward to seeing more of your work. thank you for sharing this with us.[/glow]

[allmeheart]

very nice, love the title, lol, suggestion: merge lines together, some of your lines should be one instead of two, i think it would make it flow better, but then again, just a suggestion

[Absinthe]

I liked it.....very good job.

[QueenPaige4]

Thank you very much

[Only Me]

i like it... How did i not catch it before? I must have missed a bunchof poetry somehow?

[QueenPaige4]

once again thank you